Sapphire Blue Sky

the sapphire blue sky shines with such intensity it's mood seems.... hard

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/17/2011 5:19:00 PM

THANKS SO MUCH for the blog comment Light & Love

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/9/2011 1:11:00 PM

lovely image you are personifying the sky and that takes the verse from the realm of haiku to free verse as well as having only 1 focus, no cut...yet a lovely short verse Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/1/2011 7:24:00 PM

Interesting one, francine. hard like the gemstone!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/1/2011 4:10:00 PM

That blue feeling can make life harder but it's Canada Day so smile smile smile. love phyl

The Fringe

Date: 6/30/2011 7:47:00 PM

Perhaps it's testing our resolve. If things were too easy, perhaps we would not grow. I needed the blue to force me to grow, and I am thankful. Good write.

The Fringe

Date: 6/30/2011 7:47:00 PM

Perhaps it's testing our resolve. If things were too easy, perhaps we would not grow. I needed the blue to force me to grow, and I am thankful. Good write.