Sapphire Blue Sky

the sapphire blue sky
    
      shines with such intensity

       it's mood seems....  hard
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Guzzi Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 5:19 PM
THANKS SO MUCH for the blog comment Light & Love
Guzzi Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 1:11 PM
lovely image you are personifying the sky and that takes the verse from the realm of haiku to free verse as well as having only 1 focus, no cut...yet a lovely short verse Light & Love
Dietrich Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 7:24 PM
Interesting one, francine. hard like the gemstone!
Babcock Avatar
July 1, 2011 at 4:10 PM
That blue feeling can make life harder but it's Canada Day so smile smile smile. love phyl
Fringe Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 7:47 PM
Perhaps it's testing our resolve. If things were too easy, perhaps we would not grow. I needed the blue to force me to grow, and I am thankful. Good write.
Fringe Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 7:47 PM
Perhaps it's testing our resolve. If things were too easy, perhaps we would not grow. I needed the blue to force me to grow, and I am thankful. Good write.
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