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Santorini

One day I saw this picture Of Santorini, Greece A place in which I'd never been A place to find some peace I dreamed there'd be a day go by For travel to this place To feel the ocean calm and breeze To treasure all its grace But here I am, a bit older now And very much at home I travel to my favorite places In dreams I call my own I paint the places never seen I paint the ocean blue Imagining a beautiful place I'd love to travel with you Until that time I'll take you there On canvas and a brush A stroke of dreams and color too To while away the rush So look upon my painting With dreams of places far Places been and memories Of life outside your car But if you're ever stuck at home With nowhere far to go Let a painting tell your story Or take the time to sew For we can go most anywhere a journey from the start where peace resides and sunny days like the color in my art. - Mary Susan Vaughn ©2016

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Date: 4/8/2016 6:14:00 PM
Mary, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/8/2016 12:35:00 PM
Dear mary, Nice first entry.It's a brilliant write. Hearty welcome to PS. Wish u a successful journey ahead.......hugs
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