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 Cheers A bit if light hunour as required  No offence mean't 

 

 

 

Santas Sack

I waited For Santa, I stayed up all night
I then saw the fat man, no undies in sight.
A bag he had hanging, t’was big red and bright
Ah yes I saw Santa, he swings left to right .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Miller Avatar
January 10, 2022 at 1:43 AM
hohoho, very funny Congratulations.
Watts Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 11:49 PM
Hi Terry Ho ho Ho and thanks for you review snd congrats I am very pleased as I am new on this site and not sure how this would go ha ha Many cheers christine
Allison Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 5:57 PM
absolutely hilarious! many congrats on your win xx
Watts Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 11:47 PM
Hi Jan Thanks and same to you This is my first attempt at a contest here and didn’t expect any place so I am really stoked a bit out there but you know me never conventional ha ha Cheers Chris
Flood Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 12:09 PM
Sorry to disappoint, Christine… but item number three was NOT an icicle! Congrats on your witty win. Terry
Watts Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 11:44 PM
Hi Terry ha ha thanks for your Congrats on my placement in my first( thought it may be my last lol) contest here I am very new and not sure of how people would see my ‘humour’ but being an Aussie might explain ha ha Cheers Chris
Kitchin Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 8:43 AM
Christine, congratulations on your winning placement this is very humorous!
Watts Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 11:40 PM
Hi Tania Thank you very much Didn’t expect any place but really pleased with this place Ho ho ho Cheers Christine
Calasibetta Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 1:40 PM
Guess you got caught....LOL! Very fun write. Cheers,Paulette
Watts Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 9:17 PM
Hi Paulette. yes red handed ha ha Thanks for your review much appreciated Cheers
Cunningham Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 1:06 PM
You should have been in bed Christine, very naughty of you lol. Tom
Watts Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 9:15 PM
Ha ha Tom Yes should have been Thanks for your review a little naughty at times lol Cheers
M  Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 10:51 PM
Ha that’s funny Christine….Debx
Watts Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 10:55 PM
Hi Deb thanks heaps i am away Camping with my husband enjoying the lovely Sunny weather and have times on my hands lol Might be my first and last contest entry here Glad you found it funny My husband did smile lol Cheers
Ahmed Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 10:46 PM
have to say, a bit Shocking! but humorous indeed! Nice. - Marshall
Watts Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 10:53 PM
Hi Marshall Ha ha Thanks for your review.I just couldn’t resist a little naughty one for this contest . I will probably be run out of town lol Cheers
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