Santa's Red Hot Air Balloon

Always flying high.
To reach wondrous heights unknown.
Reindeer deflector.


*For SKAT's hotair balloon contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Sweetheart Avatar
December 15, 2010 at 8:44 AM
Super cool Jimmy ..good luck in the contest with this awesome entry luv..
Devonshire Avatar
December 10, 2010 at 10:18 AM
If you're flying overnight on Christmas, it's a good idea to have a "reindeer deflector." Very funny haiku, Jimmy, and I wish you success in the contest! I'm hanging in there and plan to spend the holidays with friends in North Florida. Thanks for asking. Hope you find joy and blessings this holiday season, little brother. Love, Carolyn
Bloomsfield Avatar
December 8, 2010 at 9:23 AM
Very original take on Dear friend. .i wish you goodluck!
Haick Avatar
December 7, 2010 at 7:41 AM
Good imagery captured, JAM! Best of luck in the contest with this! Love, Audrey
Mehta Avatar
December 7, 2010 at 2:59 AM
Quite unusual theme you have chosen for the Air Balloon Ride. enjoyed it, Jimmy
Onclaud Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 10:08 PM
very imaginative... enjoyed this one, jimmy! all the best in the contest.. warmest, nette
Roberts Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 9:17 PM
cool entry Jimmy . good luck in the contest
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