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Santa, I'Ve Been Nice

Whiteness falling whirling white swift volley In the crisp hushed winter's cold bite degree Nipping flakes light dark night body lolly Gathers on glass pane quite liberally Dusk begins to wane, relaxing white sea Whiteness falling whirling white swift volley I wake up with the halls deck with holly Daze, dash down the halls, dive under the tree Nipping flakes light dark night body lolly Filled with light , I'm in heaven most jolly I cheer on one knee, Christmas gifts for me Whiteness falling whirling white swift volley The dawn brought new-fallen snow. Oh! Golly! Outside world cloak in white glitter to see Nipping flakes light dark night body lolly Hope Santa knows I've been nice, wishfully There wouldn't be a single toy; yes siree Whiteness falling whirling white swift volley Nipping flakes light dark night body lolly 12/19/2020 Deck The Halls Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Date: 1/1/2021 10:24:00 AM
Hi Eve. Now I learn about music in poetry. I can hear the Christmas song as I read your lovely villanelle. All the best, Tony
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Date: 12/31/2020 3:34:00 PM
Not naughty but nice, Lovely write Eve, Congrats on your win
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Date: 12/24/2020 6:02:00 AM
This one brings a smile. Blessings Rick. ;0)
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Date: 12/21/2020 7:16:00 AM
Very nice and positive poem. Hope you are feeling better now. Do pranayama exercises, they give renewed strength. Take care, Rama
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Date: 12/21/2020 7:49:00 AM
Rama, check into it, sounds good. Breathing exercise is always good for your lungs and bring air to your body. Thank you, I am doing much better, still have a ways to go. Hugs Eve
Date: 12/19/2020 10:16:00 PM
Extremely well written poem. The Christmas spirit is with us. God bless. ~~
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