Santa, I Want

Santa, I want you to know I've been good.
        Ask anyone except the man next door
	my teachers and all my brothers. I would
	like lots BIGGER things than I got before
	because I NEED so much! I’d like a Wii,
	a Bowen go-kart, gas-powered, bright red,
	a fifty-five-inch Samsung Smart tv,
	and I guess that’s all Santa. Your friend, Ted

November 30, 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 8:26 PM
This is just adorable, Janice. The kid needs some very rich parents!!
Canerdy Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 10:00 PM
Yes, rich parents and a brief stay at a reform school! Thank you so much, Andrea! Janice
Sergi Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 6:39 PM
This calls for a negotiation! Beautifully done, JANICE!
Canerdy Avatar
December 2, 2017 at 9:49 PM
Ralph, thanks so much! Janice
Pandit Avatar
December 1, 2017 at 6:14 AM
A fun read--well done, Janice!
Canerdy Avatar
December 1, 2017 at 8:06 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay! Janice
Tripp Avatar
November 30, 2017 at 10:22 PM
Awww... so adorable. Love it.
Canerdy Avatar
December 1, 2017 at 8:06 AM
Thanks so much, Rhoda! Janice
Roper Avatar
November 30, 2017 at 9:24 PM
Who is the men next door I wonder? Love the write. Hugs eve
Canerdy Avatar
December 1, 2017 at 8:08 AM
Thanks so much, Eve! I suspect the man next door is someone whose last nerve the kid has been on many times! LOL! Janice
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