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Sanibel's Island Shell

Stuck on brown seaweed,
its fate is sad...it awaits
death in dark exile. 

Entered in Raul Moreno's contest, " Journey "

Copyright © Andrew Crisci | Year Posted 2010

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Carolyn Devonshire

April 25, 2010 at 7:37 AM

Congratulations on taking first place in the Journey contest, Andrew, as well as on your win in the Spirits of Light contest. You are an amazing writer! Love, Carolyn

April 24, 2010 at 6:28 PM

Andrew~ CONGRATULATIONS on your first place win! Love It! Laura :)

Margaret Foster

April 24, 2010 at 5:54 PM

congratulations Andrew. Looked up Sanibel, very interesting. well done.. Margaret

Andrea Dietrich

April 24, 2010 at 4:59 PM

GREAT job, Andrew. Congratulations. Was that a snail or what?? Probably I called it the wrong thing with MY haiku. LUv, Andrea

April 24, 2010 at 4:18 PM

Good use of imagery and alliteration. Congratulations on your first place finish in Raul's contest. Way to go! Karen

Faleshia Murphy

April 24, 2010 at 3:41 PM

very nice congrats on your win faleshia

April 24, 2010 at 2:01 PM

Congrats on 1st place- Happy for you, sad for the snail

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 24, 2010 at 1:36 PM

Congrats Andrew on your first place win in Raul's contest Journey... perfect words to feature the photo..luv.. "Sweetheart"

April 24, 2010 at 1:34 PM

Andrew, congratulations on your awesome win in The Journey Contest!! Peace, audrey

April 24, 2010 at 1:26 PM

Andrew, congrats on winning my contest...Raul

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