Sanguivorous

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a sanguivorous
mosquito left itchy whelts.....
the poet writes lines

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/4/2023 9:41:00 PM

Dare sanguivorous // bite a Taurus // the result might be // bloody uproarious! (Thanks for teaching me yet another useful word, Sara!) :) gw

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/5/2023 2:29:00 AM

Gershon, I hope that you find the new word very useful in your writing and maybe even spoken lines. Thank you for dropping by. Sara K

Jack Horne

Date: 10/29/2023 6:54:00 AM

oh, love this clever one!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/29/2023 8:43:00 AM

I am delighted that you liked it. I was thinking about the early morning when I was attacked at my computer while writing poetry. Thanks for the visits. Sara K

Silent One

Date: 10/28/2023 9:29:00 AM

I wonder if there is a deeper meaning to this, but as a senryu, it is probably as it states... nice last line for this one..

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/28/2023 4:03:00 PM

Well, despite the pain and itching, the poet kept on trying to write might be a deeper meaning to the work. LOL..Thanks for dropping by, SO. Your visits always add a special touch. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/28/2023 2:13:00 AM

Summer is full of these pests and they make me nervous. One solution is a rub with a slice of lemon. Blessings.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/28/2023 5:21:00 AM

Wow!! Victor, such a nice smelling solution to the problem and lemon is great to compliment fried foods to help prevent indigestion. Thanks for dropping by with your blessings and kind review of my work. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 10/27/2023 2:15:00 PM

Cute senryu, mosquitoes always love biting me. Ugh! I love how you’ve written this and also the picture used! That last line “ the poet writes lines” is brilliant! Loved reading this! As always! Something honest and refreshing to read from you! For the poetic sincerity and depth! Sending you light always

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/27/2023 2:46:00 PM

Thank you, I E, for the light sent. I appreciate the high praise of my work. Sara K