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Tell the Moms it didn't happen Tell the Dads it isn't so Pretty little roses blooming In the garden – row on row – Pretty little blossoms folding Petals falling to the floor Falling into angels rising Sprouting wings on which to soar Smite the gunman at the trigger! Seize the madman at the gun! Little voices in the hallway Little faces in the sun Little feet upon the heavens With the morning just begun – Strike the harp, and hold the fiddle Let the bells peal out the tune Mournful as the lonely shepherd 'Ere the clock is noon Mourning for his little flock Going home too soon – And when the news had broken And gotten all abroad The stoutest of the stoutest hearts Could only weep aloud For here the pact was broken For here the seal was lost For here the children were not spared The devil's holocaust And startled in his earthly robes His heart gone sudden cold Himself a witness to the siege Even God arose And with a savage grace That moved without a sound Turned the barrel on itself And with the final round Emptied out the chamber And smote the demon down –

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Date: 12/15/2024 9:20:00 PM
Deep work, John - you described human tragedy so raw and well
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John Oldham
Date: 12/16/2024 3:16:00 PM
Thank you, Paige :)
Date: 12/15/2024 8:52:00 AM
Wow, John, this certainly is a masterpiece. I am shaken by the truth of it. Excellent write.
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John Oldham
Date: 12/16/2024 3:14:00 PM
Thank You, Moon Harp!
Date: 12/15/2024 1:53:00 AM
John this is a masterpiece. I think the best I have read of yours. That first verse particularly, is so brilliantly composed. Tragic. Sad. Beautiful. Horrific. Great work. Cheers - Gary
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John Oldham
Date: 12/16/2024 3:13:00 PM
Thanks, Gary! As always, appreciate your comments.
Date: 12/14/2024 5:17:00 PM
This is a brilliant poem, John. Albeit very sad. It can be difficult to write about real life tragedies so eloquently, but you've managed to do so without compromising the darkness of its truth. Very well written.
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John Oldham
Date: 12/16/2024 3:11:00 PM
Thanks, Shane. I like your point about the darkness of its truth - very insightful. Just now watching the news of another school shooting in Wisconsin. So sad :(
Date: 12/14/2024 7:04:00 AM
l cant find the right words to express the pain coming from the words in this poem. So l just want to say you wrote it with a heart that see's into the depth of the human suffering that many of us never see. May poetry heal all pain and suffering for all, keep writing my friend and keep sharing your poems. Jx
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John Oldham
Date: 12/16/2024 3:08:00 PM
Thank you for your warm thoughts, Jackie. Much appreciated -

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