Sandwich

locking legs and lips arms intertwined vining limbs even eyes seeing each other she is peanut butter and i am jam

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Lady Labyrinth

Date: 6/27/2019 9:41:00 AM

...thick whipped cream and apricot jam on toast for breakfast beats (and please don't take that literally), peanut butter and jam. p.s. just reading that again, I guess, her being peanut butter makes her kind of rough and salty and you being jam, smooth and sweet? I don't know, you Americans need to get your recipes sorted out toot sweet.

Jeff Connelly
Date: 6/27/2019 10:32:00 AM

Jajaja love your comment. Actually her skin tone is closer to nutella, but I prefer homemade peanut butter; smooth; no salt. Though I'm sure her sweat tastes good. Thanks