Sands of Time

SANDS      OF      TIME
 
My child the struggler-
Half-buried, sand-holer
From fractious family.
Each christmas hollowly
 
Joyless in the cold
Tracks  in the snow,
A pointless journey
A useless straggler
 
My boy filled the void,
Though almost destroyed.
Controlling with care
And knowing when and where
Trying to survive 
In that world half-alive
 
My man's half-drowned
In the sand pit around.
My wife seeks my pain
As each running grain
Pours back, fills the hole.
She rescues my soul.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 9, 2010 at 12:02 PM
silent as it all satands still,, enjoyed your poem,.p.d.
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October 9, 2010 at 8:20 AM
very creative and interesting write on Sands of time, very realistic
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