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Sands of Time

The sands of time trickle down, Measuring the days of man, Who now has lost his spiritual crown And has abandoned salvation's plan. 6-8-18 When A Fourth Line Helps it To Rhyme Contest Sponsor: Silent One

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/16/2018 10:26:00 AM

Filled with your deep religious convictions, Joseph. Beautifully done, and won!

Eve Roper

Date: 6/14/2018 8:56:00 PM

Wonderful write, Joseph !:-) Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~’*

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/13/2018 7:31:00 AM

Congratulations for your win Joseph :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/13/2018 7:24:00 AM

- Congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 6/13/2018 7:16:00 AM

You are so right Joseph... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Joseph May
Date: 6/13/2018 2:11:00 PM

Thanks for my placement Silent

Tim Smith

Date: 6/8/2018 10:17:00 AM

Truth

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/8/2018 6:44:00 AM

A sad, well written poem Joseph. Good luck in the contest :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/8/2018 6:39:00 AM

- So true and great written, Joseph - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Artsieladie Sharon Donnelly

Date: 6/8/2018 5:41:00 AM

Sadly, it's a reality, Joseph. Best of luck in the contest and all the best to you. :) ~ Artsie