Joseph May Poet Rhyme

Sands of Time

The sands of time trickle down,
 Measuring the days of man,
 Who now has lost his spiritual crown
 And has abandoned salvation's plan.
                        
  6-8-18
 When A Fourth Line Helps it To Rhyme Contest
 Sponsor: Silent One

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Andrea Dietrich June 16, 2018 at 10:26 AM Filled with your deep religious convictions, Joseph. Beautifully done, and won!

Eve Roper June 14, 2018 at 8:56 PM Wonderful write, Joseph !:-) Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~’*

Heidi Sands June 13, 2018 at 7:31 AM Congratulations for your win Joseph :)

Anne-Lise Andresen June 13, 2018 at 7:24 AM - Congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One June 13, 2018 at 7:16 AM You are so right Joseph... Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Joseph May June 13, 2018 at 2:11 PM Thanks for my placement Silent

Tim Smith June 8, 2018 at 10:17 AM Truth

Heidi Sands June 8, 2018 at 6:44 AM A sad, well written poem Joseph. Good luck in the contest :)

Anne-Lise Andresen June 8, 2018 at 6:39 AM - So true and great written, Joseph - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Artsieladie Sharon Donnelly June 8, 2018 at 5:41 AM Sadly, it's a reality, Joseph. Best of luck in the contest and all the best to you. :) ~ Artsie