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Sands of Time

Sands Of Time Deep into the sands of time, I saw myself walking along the beach The many scenes which flashed through the scenic sky Had woven a path right before my viewing eyes A lightened untrodden footprint embedded in the sands Were graced with a whitened set of holiness as if they were Touched by an angel from the highest god from up above. With this thought, it started to bother me for I noticed As I walked among many low times in my life; I had suffered many a time through hardships to Which I can never verbally say out loud. Oh my lord! I saw two sets of footprints At this moment in time as I walk through the golden sands of time I only see one set of footprints and a deep imprint embedded into my logical mind. Written: March 5/2018 Evie

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Date: 3/27/2018 5:43:00 PM
Dear Evie... As Silent One said, the last stanza was beautiful!!! "I saw two sets of footprints. At this moment in time as I walk through the golden sands of time, I only see one set of footprints and a deep imprint embedded into my logical mind" Love, Happy Jack XOX
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Date: 3/27/2018 11:23:00 PM
Thank you, Jack, for your precious comment on this poem of mine. So very happy to see your smiling face on my page. Evie... XOX
Date: 3/27/2018 4:21:00 AM
I really like how you came full circle in your thought process from the beginning to the end of this poem; a spiritual masterpiece, Evie.
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Date: 3/27/2018 4:31:00 AM
Thank you so very much for your awesome comment on this penned poem of mine. Especially how you ended your comment. Thanks again Caren.
Date: 3/26/2018 7:33:00 AM
A lovely poem, Love that last stanza.. Great prose..
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Date: 3/26/2018 6:51:00 PM
Thank you so very much Silent One for your beauty of a comment especially on the last stanza... Have a great day
Date: 3/26/2018 3:27:00 AM
Uplifting poetry, majestically presented dear, Evelyn. Welcome into our poetic family. May your soul find solace in our harbor of love!
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Date: 3/26/2018 3:38:00 AM
Thank you very much Demetrios for your beauty of a comment. Greatly appreciated.

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