Evie Cw Poet Verse

Sands of Time

Sands Of Time

Deep into the sands of time, I saw myself walking along the beach
The many scenes which flashed through the scenic sky
Had woven a path right before my viewing eyes
A lightened untrodden footprint embedded in the sands
Were graced with a whitened set of holiness as if they were
Touched by an angel from the highest god from up above.

With this thought, it started to bother me for I noticed
As I walked among many low times in my life;
I had suffered many a time through hardships to
Which I can never verbally say out loud.

Oh my lord! I saw two sets of footprints
At this moment in time as I walk through
the golden sands of time I only see one set of footprints
and a deep imprint embedded into my logical mind.


Written: March 5/2018
Evie

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Jack Ellison March 27, 2018 at 5:43 PM Dear Evie... As Silent One said, the last stanza was beautiful!!! "I saw two sets of footprints. At this moment in time as I walk through the golden sands of time, I only see one set of footprints and a deep imprint embedded into my logical mind" Love, Happy Jack XOX Evie Cw March 27, 2018 at 11:23 PM Thank you, Jack, for your precious comment on this poem of mine. So very happy to see your smiling face on my page. Evie... XOX

Caren Krutsinger March 27, 2018 at 4:21 AM I really like how you came full circle in your thought process from the beginning to the end of this poem; a spiritual masterpiece, Evie. Evie Cw March 27, 2018 at 4:31 AM Thank you so very much for your awesome comment on this penned poem of mine. Especially how you ended your comment. Thanks again Caren.

Silent One March 26, 2018 at 7:33 AM A lovely poem, Love that last stanza.. Great prose.. Evie Cw March 26, 2018 at 6:51 PM Thank you so very much Silent One for your beauty of a comment especially on the last stanza... Have a great day

Demetrios Trifiatis March 26, 2018 at 3:27 AM Uplifting poetry, majestically presented dear, Evelyn. Welcome into our poetic family. May your soul find solace in our harbor of love! Evie Cw March 26, 2018 at 3:38 AM Thank you very much Demetrios for your beauty of a comment. Greatly appreciated.