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Sandgoanna Blue

SandGoanna Blue Blue sky they said, it was overhead, not like the Los Angles pink. Sangoanna walked by, with a black an blue eye. I asked him what do you think? I’ve been into it too, with cattle dog blue. Hi think he gave me an hernia, I fanged him a bit, dummy cared not a bit, think’s, I’m getting a little bit wormier. He staggered away, in a wobbly way, Old blue was just bound to snicker, Went to the fowlhouse, Just past the outhouse, Sucked eggs, dodged Rooster, a bit quicker. Almost Francines con. got sidetracked. Don Johnson 29-june-11

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Date: 6/28/2011 9:02:00 PM
an exciting trail with descriptive images.. best winning luck, cory..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 6/28/2011 8:39:00 PM
reads cute and clever..u made it your own DON.. so good luck in the contest with this tale of entanglement..luv..
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Date: 6/28/2011 6:21:00 PM
this was awesome and if for a contest then good luck cory
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Date: 6/28/2011 6:11:00 PM
This is a cute one with some really good imagery. It gave me a smile. Thanks for sharing. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/28/2011 5:37:00 PM
I always enjoy the lingo in which you write, give the original flavor, Don
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Date: 6/28/2011 5:29:00 PM
for Brians contest you need to look on page 9, he never puts the proper date he's judged , just keeps putting may1st, no idea why
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