Sandcastles

"Daddy look at all the sandcastles"
"Aren't they all so grand?"
"Who could have known a king and his throne,
Could simply be made out of sand"

"Look at the beautiful towers"
"I wonder if a princess lives there"
"I'll bet she is kind, they're so hard to find,
With beautiful long flowing hair"

My daughter loved to go to the beach
She loved the sandcastles the best
But she didn't know her heart was too slow
And soon they would open her chest

It's funny sometimes how time can fly
It only seems like yesterday
With some complication during her operation
My daughter has passed away

I still go to the beach from time to time
To see the sandcastles on display
I still close my eyes and say my goodbyes
Each time I hear her say

"Daddy look at all the sandcastles"
"Aren't they all so grand?"
"Who could have known a king and his throne,
Could simply be made out of sand"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Macfarlane Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 9:39 PM
Touching and sad write Larry....best of luck in the contest. Hugs
Taylor Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 12:28 PM
First class entry, Larry. Tragic and moving. Best of luck in the contest. Reads like a winner to me. Great job. Have a great weekend, my friend. Keep 'em comin". God bless. Ralph
Andresen Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 5:25 AM
So sad . . . but still a beautiful poem Larry. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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