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Sandcastles

SANDCASTLES

Days off when I didn’t have to teach
Used  to take the boys to the beach
Instead of wrastling
To do some sandcastling
Moats,  bridges -  very  elaborate, 
Tunnels,  canals,   walls,  gate.
Kept   ‘em busy all day.
Enjoyed it greatly :  work - but play.
Sweating, like pyramid builders, toiling;
Or   colony-ants  embroiling. 
Some digging seaweed,  some filling, 
Others for flat stones searching:
The  stones  for revetment,
Seaweed for reinforcement.
At last they took shape
Palaces of sand across the beachscape,
Like Babylon,  Rome or Troy
Invincible, impossible to destroy.



Late in the day tide started to creep,
Recovered from its short-lived sleep,
Coming  to wash all away,
As if it never existed all day. 
We decided we were not  saddened, 
Simply interested when  it happened.
Another castle could be built tomorrow -
No tears  no sorrow.
Be satisfied with the product resulting. 
Be justified in exulting.
We learned how to work, organize, plan,
Build, achieve,  enjoy effort, become a man.
Accept the inevitable end with tide.
But the memory, the lesson will  abide
Sandcastles go,   but experience stays - 
Cant be wiped for the rest of your days.
Sandcastling’s  not  a product with fail or success
A  life spent   with the kids  is  a tide-proof process

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Written by Sydney  Peck
Entered in  Gail Doyle's   Contest 	Sandcastles By The Seashore

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/29/2010 11:26:00 AM
May your week bring you good health,may your heart overflow with love, and may your life bring you amazing inspiration to continue your writing. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning and thank you for sharing it Sydney. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/29/2010 7:26:00 AM
Dear Sydney: Wow!! Fantastic poem. It really reminds us to stop and smell the roses (and build castles). That time with family and friends last way beyond the material things in life. Have a great day.
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