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Sandcastles

The loose grains are packed,
To tower the atmosphere;
Palace made of sand.

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Carolyn Devonshire

February 27, 2009 at 12:18 AM

Raul, I can clearly see the sandcastle. Inspiring image! My best to you, Carolyn

Daniel Neal

February 24, 2009 at 2:48 AM

Palce in the sand, nice line in this great senryu. Your work inspires me greatly. DN

Catherine Reinke

February 23, 2009 at 6:41 AM

hey thank you for the correction. I think I have been too concerned with getting things posted. really thanks. Do you write every day poems Raul? catherine

Christopher Higgins

February 23, 2009 at 5:52 AM

I love this ..my kids love to do this at the beach and I love watching them..thanks for the cool comments Raul.. love the Siskel and Ebert thumbs up..LOL

Sharon Winter

February 23, 2009 at 5:19 AM

Interesting Senryu Raul. Well done. Thank you so much for your kind note. It's so great to be back. Love, Shar

Chris Goombi

February 23, 2009 at 1:48 AM

What's up? I like to look at them after they are built. They are a sight to see. -Boo

Elizabeth Neal

February 23, 2009 at 1:03 AM

Sandcastles are great to make and to look at but I like walking barefoot on the beach. Love E.

Brian Strand

February 23, 2009 at 12:29 AM

Nice work Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Arany P.

February 22, 2009 at 11:04 PM

beautiful, Raul!! lovely senryu... ~ Arany

Tyesha Ehigiator

February 22, 2009 at 8:42 PM

Awesome Senryu, great image here...I never had the pleasure of building one before, but they are beautiful to look at..Great work here..God Bless*Tyesha