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Sandcastles

The loose grains are packed, To tower the atmosphere; Palace made of sand.

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/27/2009 12:18:00 AM

Raul, I can clearly see the sandcastle. Inspiring image! My best to you, Carolyn

Daniel Neal

Date: 2/24/2009 2:48:00 AM

Palce in the sand, nice line in this great senryu. Your work inspires me greatly. DN

Catherine Reinke

Date: 2/23/2009 6:41:00 AM

hey thank you for the correction. I think I have been too concerned with getting things posted. really thanks. Do you write every day poems Raul? catherine

Christopher Higgins

Date: 2/23/2009 5:52:00 AM

I love this ..my kids love to do this at the beach and I love watching them..thanks for the cool comments Raul.. love the Siskel and Ebert thumbs up..LOL

Sharon Winter

Date: 2/23/2009 5:19:00 AM

Interesting Senryu Raul. Well done. Thank you so much for your kind note. It's so great to be back. Love, Shar

Chris Goombi

Date: 2/23/2009 1:48:00 AM

What's up? I like to look at them after they are built. They are a sight to see. -Boo

Elizabeth Neal

Date: 2/23/2009 1:03:00 AM

Sandcastles are great to make and to look at but I like walking barefoot on the beach. Love E.

Brian Strand

Date: 2/23/2009 12:29:00 AM

Nice work Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Arany P.

Date: 2/22/2009 11:04:00 PM

beautiful, Raul!! lovely senryu... ~ Arany

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 2/22/2009 8:42:00 PM

Awesome Senryu, great image here...I never had the pleasure of building one before, but they are beautiful to look at..Great work here..God Bless*Tyesha

Tyler Martin

Date: 2/22/2009 8:07:00 PM

Great Senryu Raul, this one is nicley penned. I like to built sandcastles. Job well done. Tyler

Belinda Parish

Date: 2/22/2009 7:43:00 PM

Love the write Raul. Brings back good memories.