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Sandcastles

silver tipped teal swell unhurried race to shoreline … a child's dream disposed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 7/29/2020 12:54:00 AM
Intricate emotions Joseph. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/28/2020 11:54:00 PM
I felt that sandcastle topple in slow unhurried collapse...nice imagery! Congrats on the win.
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Date: 7/27/2020 2:57:00 AM
superb imagery and I love that juxtaposition .. one of the best haiku i have read in a long time! into my faves:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/27/2020 12:21:00 AM
Wow! Captures the throb of the life pulse, rotating polarities! I particularly liked the opening words “ silver tipped teal swell” ... Waves bringing wisdom ... To embrace, hold and release ... Celebrate each pulse
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