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Sandcastle Washed Away

So fragile and tall, as the big dreams that built it, washed away by rain.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/7/2010 3:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/7/2010 12:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this awesome poem, Andrew! I'm sending wishes for holiday blessings your way. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2010 5:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Andrew in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2010 9:49:00 PM

love that line, as the big dreams that built it. Congratulation in this contest, Andrew. Luv, Andrea

Kash Poet

Date: 12/6/2010 5:13:00 PM

Congrats Andrew on winning 4th place-kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/6/2010 3:27:00 PM

Congrats Andrew on another big win in Irma's contest with this rare beauty entry my friend.. enjoy your top spot tonight with luv..

John Freeman

Date: 12/6/2010 8:14:00 AM

Congratulations Andrew on your 4th place, Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/6/2010 2:11:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of skat, Andrew

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/5/2010 11:26:00 PM

so true Andrew, enjoyed this. congrats. Harry

Skat A

Date: 12/5/2010 9:28:00 PM

Andrew~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/5/2010 11:54:00 AM

enjoyed your entry,, good luck in the contest,..p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/5/2010 10:13:00 AM

So many of our dreams succumb to the storms of life, Andrew. A very insightful entry for the contest and I'm wishing you success! Love, Carolyn

Francine Roberts

Date: 12/5/2010 10:11:00 AM

love it, good luck in the contest