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Sandcastle Washed Away

So fragile and tall,
as the big dreams that built it,
washed away by rain.

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Sara Kendrick

December 7, 2010 at 3:08 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

December 7, 2010 at 12:57 PM

Congratulations on your win with this awesome poem, Andrew! I'm sending wishes for holiday blessings your way. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 7, 2010 at 5:42 AM

Congratulations on your win Andrew in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol

Andrea Dietrich

December 6, 2010 at 9:49 PM

love that line, as the big dreams that built it. Congratulation in this contest, Andrew. Luv, Andrea

Kash Poet

December 6, 2010 at 5:13 PM

Congrats Andrew on winning 4th place-kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

December 6, 2010 at 3:27 PM

Congrats Andrew on another big win in Irma's contest with this rare beauty entry my friend.. enjoy your top spot tonight with luv..

John Freeman

December 6, 2010 at 8:14 AM

Congratulations Andrew on your 4th place, Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

December 6, 2010 at 2:11 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of skat, Andrew

Harry Horsman

December 5, 2010 at 11:26 PM

so true Andrew, enjoyed this. congrats. Harry

Skat A

December 5, 2010 at 9:28 PM

Andrew~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT