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Sandcastle lost not dreams

Dream sand castle tall Waves attack for Conquest Castle lost not dreams ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- © Hitendra Mehta 10th Place - Members Contest – Sandcastle (Haiku) sponsored by S K A T -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Date: 12/14/2010 12:32:00 PM
A very insightful and touching haiku, Hitendra. Congratulations on your win and thank you for your kind words. Love and blessings, Carolyn
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Date: 12/9/2010 2:19:00 PM
line 1 has your subject..that's good! Line 2 has your action...good! at the end of this line which is called the CUT (by which they mean you are changing gear and showing another view of the same topic) you put 3 dots...Also NO capitalization or periods in this form. Lots of luck & I will keep checking in on the sestina!
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Date: 12/9/2010 3:42:00 AM
Big Congratulations,keep the ink flowing :)Celene.
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Date: 12/8/2010 11:49:00 PM
this is so true in life, Hitendra, awesome poem. Harry
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Date: 12/7/2010 9:05:00 PM
how wonderful for dreams to not have been lost! Enjoyed this one, Hitendra :) congrats on your win :) -- nikko :)
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Date: 12/7/2010 3:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Especially like the last line..Sara
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Date: 12/7/2010 5:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Hitendra in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol
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Date: 12/6/2010 10:10:00 PM
we can rebuild em. john
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Date: 12/6/2010 10:05:00 PM
Good one, Hitendra. You created a wonderful thought with this one. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/6/2010 7:39:00 PM
Congrats Hitendra on your win-kashinath
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Date: 12/6/2010 3:45:00 PM
Congrats Hitendra on your top ten win in Irma's contest with this rare beauty entry my friend.. enjoy another big win tonight with luv..
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Date: 12/6/2010 12:09:00 PM
good succinct wording Hitendra, good to see your placement and wishing you much future success.
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Date: 12/6/2010 8:35:00 AM
Congratulations Hitendra, on your place in the winner circle, Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/6/2010 4:38:00 AM
Thank you !!! and congrats to you also...luv Michael
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Date: 12/6/2010 2:24:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of skat, Hitendra
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Date: 12/5/2010 9:51:00 PM
Many Congratulations for this well deserved win,your message goes deep beyond the castle. .Wonderful!-dear friend are you a relative of Dr.R.Mehta,cos you write as beautiful as he,and he's one of my favourite poets :)
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Date: 12/5/2010 9:43:00 PM
HITENDRA~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT
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Date: 12/5/2010 8:44:00 PM
Very good one Hitendra. many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 12/5/2010 1:03:00 PM
Good one that reads like a winner to me..Good luck. I especially like the last line..I was delighted that you stopped by, read, and commented on my work..Sara
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Date: 12/4/2010 2:09:00 PM
castle lost not dream... quite true. it is a lesson to be learnt of the detachment.Hitendra
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Date: 12/4/2010 1:55:00 PM
enjoyed reading your work...so true....dream big at least we will get some of them.
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Date: 12/4/2010 1:00:00 PM
Lovely sentiments Hitendra.. good luck in the contest my friend.. a super entry and wonderful thoughts... my entry is "Love Castles in the Sand".. happy weekend with luv..
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