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Sandcastle Lost Not Dreams

Dream sand castle tall
Waves attack for Conquest
Castle lost not dreams 

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© Hitendra Mehta  

10th Place - Members Contest – Sandcastle (Haiku) sponsored by S K A T
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Carolyn Devonshire Date: 12/14/2010 12:32:00 PM A very insightful and touching haiku, Hitendra. Congratulations on your win and thank you for your kind words. Love and blessings, Carolyn Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 12/9/2010 2:19:00 PM line 1 has your subject..that's good! Line 2 has your action...good! at the end of this line which is called the CUT (by which they mean you are changing gear and showing another view of the same topic) you put 3 dots...Also NO capitalization or periods in this form. Lots of luck & I will keep checking in on the sestina! Login to Reply

C.C Bloomsfield Date: 12/9/2010 3:42:00 AM Big Congratulations,keep the ink flowing :)Celene. Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 12/8/2010 11:49:00 PM this is so true in life, Hitendra, awesome poem. Harry Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 12/7/2010 9:05:00 PM how wonderful for dreams to not have been lost! Enjoyed this one, Hitendra :) congrats on your win :) -- nikko :) Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/7/2010 3:24:00 PM Congratulations on your win..Especially like the last line..Sara Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 12/7/2010 5:59:00 AM Congratulations on your win Hitendra in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol Login to Reply

John Loving Iii Date: 12/6/2010 10:10:00 PM we can rebuild em. john Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/6/2010 10:05:00 PM Good one, Hitendra. You created a wonderful thought with this one. Congratulations. Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 12/6/2010 7:39:00 PM Congrats Hitendra on your win-kashinath Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 12/6/2010 3:45:00 PM Congrats Hitendra on your top ten win in Irma's contest with this rare beauty entry my friend.. enjoy another big win tonight with luv.. Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 12/6/2010 12:09:00 PM good succinct wording Hitendra, good to see your placement and wishing you much future success. Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 12/6/2010 8:35:00 AM Congratulations Hitendra, on your place in the winner circle, Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 12/6/2010 4:38:00 AM Thank you !!! and congrats to you also...luv Michael Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 12/6/2010 2:24:00 AM Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of skat, Hitendra Login to Reply

C.C Bloomsfield Date: 12/5/2010 9:51:00 PM Many Congratulations for this well deserved win,your message goes deep beyond the castle. .Wonderful!-dear friend are you a relative of Dr.R.Mehta,cos you write as beautiful as he,and he's one of my favourite poets :) Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 12/5/2010 9:43:00 PM HITENDRA~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 12/5/2010 8:44:00 PM Very good one Hitendra. many congratulations for this win. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/5/2010 1:03:00 PM Good one that reads like a winner to me..Good luck. I especially like the last line..I was delighted that you stopped by, read, and commented on my work..Sara Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 12/4/2010 2:09:00 PM castle lost not dream... quite true. it is a lesson to be learnt of the detachment.Hitendra Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 12/4/2010 1:55:00 PM enjoyed reading your work...so true....dream big at least we will get some of them. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 12/4/2010 1:00:00 PM Lovely sentiments Hitendra.. good luck in the contest my friend.. a super entry and wonderful thoughts... my entry is "Love Castles in the Sand".. happy weekend with luv.. Login to Reply