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Sand Castles

built on sand

toppled by waves of sorrow….

free love

~//~

©  03 Dec 2010

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Robb A. Kopp

Date: 12/9/2010 7:37:00 AM

Very thought provoking...Bravo! Congratulations on your win

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/7/2010 3:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your win ..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/7/2010 5:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Charles in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2010 9:59:00 PM

awesome message that I wish all would take to heart. Congratulations, Charles.

Kash Poet

Date: 12/6/2010 6:55:00 PM

Congrats Charles on your win.-kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/6/2010 3:37:00 PM

Congrats Charles on another big win in Irma's contest with this awesome entry my friend.. enjoy another top ten sweet victory tonight with luv..

John Freeman

Date: 12/6/2010 8:27:00 AM

Congratulation on 8th place, Agape, Moses

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/6/2010 2:19:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of skat, Charles

Skat A

Date: 12/5/2010 9:37:00 PM

Charles~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT

Jamecia Buggs

Date: 12/4/2010 5:16:00 PM

WoW........Great Haiku.Good luck on contest

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/4/2010 8:37:00 AM

Good one..Good luck in the contest with your winner's circle work.Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/4/2010 6:49:00 AM

Your poem takes us back to the late '60s and early '70s, Charles. The "free love" movement was spawned by sadness over loss of lives in Vietnam. This is an incredible entry for the contest. I remember those days well. Love and blessings, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/4/2010 3:36:00 AM

Nice images to compare castle with life, Charles

Sand Castles

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