Sand Castles

built on sand toppled by waves of sorrow…. free love ~//~ © 03 Dec 2010
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Kopp Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 7:37 AM
Very thought provoking...Bravo! Congratulations on your win
Kendrick Avatar
December 7, 2010 at 3:15 PM
Congratulations on your win ..Sara
Brown Avatar
December 7, 2010 at 5:55 AM
Congratulations on your win Charles in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol
Dietrich Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 9:59 PM
awesome message that I wish all would take to heart. Congratulations, Charles.
Poet Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 6:55 PM
Congrats Charles on your win.-kashinath
Sweetheart Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 3:37 PM
Congrats Charles on another big win in Irma's contest with this awesome entry my friend.. enjoy another top ten sweet victory tonight with luv..
Freeman Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 8:27 AM
Congratulation on 8th place, Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 2:19 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of skat, Charles
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December 5, 2010 at 9:37 PM
Charles~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT
Buggs Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 5:16 PM
WoW........Great Haiku.Good luck on contest
Kendrick Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 8:37 AM
Good one..Good luck in the contest with your winner's circle work.Sara
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December 4, 2010 at 6:49 AM
Your poem takes us back to the late '60s and early '70s, Charles. The "free love" movement was spawned by sadness over loss of lives in Vietnam. This is an incredible entry for the contest. I remember those days well. Love and blessings, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 3:36 AM
Nice images to compare castle with life, Charles
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