Sand Castle Memories

I was his princess
Our castle was so special
A labor of love

We two together
Forever memories shared
The sand, Sea, and we
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
December 7, 2010 at 3:13 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Brown Avatar
December 7, 2010 at 5:53 AM
Congratulations on your win Shar in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol
Brown Avatar
December 7, 2010 at 5:52 AM
Congratulations on your win Shar in S K A T*s "Sandcastle Haiku"contest. Love,Carol
Dietrich Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 9:56 PM
Beautiful, the sand, sea and we. Congratulations. LUv, Andrea
Poet Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 5:54 PM
Congrats on your win-kashinath
Sweetheart Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 3:33 PM
Way to go Shar .. congrats on another big win in Irma's contest with this rare beauty entry luv.. enjoy a sweet victory tonight my friend..
Maverick Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 12:20 PM
pleased for your placement in SKATS contest Sharon, wishing the best Joe.
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December 6, 2010 at 11:40 AM
Thank all of my poetry friends for your wonderful comments. This poem is actually dedicated to my Father who when he was still here with me, we would spend wonderful moments at the Sea Shore. What a wonderful way to remember him. Thank you As Always, Shar
Freeman Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 8:24 AM
Congratulations Sharon on your 6th place, Agape, Moses
Falotico Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 4:29 AM
Great write!!!! and congrats on your win...love Michael
Mehta Avatar
December 6, 2010 at 2:16 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of skat, Sharon
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December 5, 2010 at 9:33 PM
Sharon~CONGRATULATIONS! And a super thank for the nice & amazing entry. I had so much fun pretending to ride out every haiku. Many of the haiku's had more meaning to them than I expected. God bless*luv~SKAT
Mehta Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 2:12 PM
Nice memories you have expressed of the sand, Sea and we, Sharon
Sweetheart Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 1:07 PM
Beautiful piece Sharon... a lovely entry ..good luck in the contest.. so romantic I can so relate my friend.. my entry is "Love Castles in the Sand".. happy weekend with luv..
Falotico Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 11:26 AM
This is nice and romantic....a winner my dear...luv Michael
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