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Sand Castle

Sand castle on the shore proudly standing tall building it was a chore during the heavy rainfall Little banners are waving from each of its turrets the weather they are braving as the single child revisits The sea now rushing forward each wave causing more damage as they keep rolling onward relentless invasive wreckage Soon it lays in total carnage just prism sands once more left behind by the sea's voyage no sign of the castle there before

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/7/2013 7:41:00 PM
Shadow What a unique and creative write. You brought the reader through the "life" of this castle as if we were right there making it ourselves. Nice job Thanks for the sweet comment on my Christmas Tale poem. Hugs
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Date: 12/7/2013 8:01:00 PM
hi Robin ty glad you enjoyed it Shadow x smile hug
Date: 11/10/2013 7:03:00 AM
very beautifully drawn piece dear friend
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Date: 11/5/2013 10:17:00 AM
Many sandcastles are no longer exists but our memories keep them alive. You have beautifully compared with life of ours. Nice job, my beautiful friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 11/4/2013 5:52:00 PM
wonderful write Shadow...best wishes
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Date: 11/5/2013 7:39:00 AM
Ty Joseph hug Shadow x smile
Date: 11/4/2013 3:22:00 PM
love this write, bringing back childhood memories of a holiday by the sea - and my shock that my sandcastle was gone in the morning
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Date: 11/5/2013 7:42:00 AM
hi Jack TY for reading I guess you were quite young 5? 6? one of the first disappointments in life followed by learning Santa is not real (or is he ) Shadow x smile hug
Date: 11/4/2013 2:11:00 PM
- Washed away by the waves .... but your words are still here ... it is beautiful and a little sad. - Thank you, Shadow. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/5/2013 7:51:00 AM
what a lovely way of looking at it Anne Lise TY for reading Shadow x smile

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