Sand and Rock Overture

Blazing orange sun
Sings sky and ocean duet.
Foaming finale.


Inspired by Raul's Seascapes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Beaufort Avatar
February 15, 2010 at 7:01 AM
Great--painted by a poet with a master pallette.
Delacroix Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 6:45 PM
Awesome, Marty! I can hear the concert in this well written Haiku. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on seascape. The sea must be in a few poets' mind these days. I wrote this before I even knew about the contest. As you said, sitting on the beach is a relaxing thing to do. Best wishes, Caroline.
Chircop Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 2:34 PM
I love this Duet.....It captures my soul,,bravo Marty..Charma
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February 14, 2010 at 12:40 PM
I like the active nature of this poem. Interesting use of personification in the second line. Best wishes in the contest. Keep on writing. Karen
Culverhouse Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 11:52 AM
I like it, peachy!!
Hilliker Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 8:07 AM
You did a great job on this Seascape Haiku. Good luck in Raul's contest.
A  Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 7:33 AM
NICE VIEW .GREAT HAIKU...ENJOY YOUR VALENTINE DAY .....BESIDES YOUR POEM I ALSO ENJOYED YOUR NICE COMMENTS...I DO LIVE NEAR AN OCEAN .NEXT TIME I AM THIER, I WILL REMEMBER YOUR HAIKU.....IRMA
Sweetheart Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 7:32 AM
Another good one... another great Haiku of visual vividness .. more good luck for this contest... luv your title... thankxxx for all your loving and wonderful comments on my poetry reads... so appreciative of our friendship and poetry ..luv.. "Sweetheart"
Kendrick Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 4:27 AM
Great Haiku that should be in the winner's circle. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 12:53 AM
This was really awesome!!
Foster Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 12:15 AM
So much beauty in the picture and so many ways of expressing that beauty. you have done a lovely job here....Margaret
Witt-King Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 11:17 PM
And now yet another perspective! Beautifully done, Marty.
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