Sand

Waves crashing
making a splashing
as young ones building
castles that are standing.
Running
and laughing
all why having 
parents watching.
Burying
and digging
each one laughing
as they are playing.
Parents taking
and carrying
the children into the waves crashing.
Some kids crying
others laughing.
Children all having
fun on summer break
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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January 24, 2014 at 5:52 PM
Michael What a fun and entertaining write. Reminds me of a nice hot summer day on the beach. Its very cold here so it was nice to read a poem that makes me feel warm and cozy. Nice job Thanks for the awesome comment on my Eternity poem.
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January 24, 2014 at 5:57 PM
Your so welcome my friend. Thank you for your comments glad I could warm you up from the cold. Your friend Michael
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