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SAND

SAND All-around And in my hand Is golden dust And silver sand It moves in sequence Swirls and flows Through my fingers Through my toes When sand begins It starts to guide Through happy times And when we slide Like life itself The sand can see All I have And what I'll be

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Date: 11/28/2023 11:34:00 PM
This makes me want to goto the beach! Just to sit on the sand and let it run through my hand. Love the first stanza. Grains of sand are truly countless.
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Date: 11/25/2023 9:23:00 PM
clear and well expressed chain of thought - nice
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