Sand

You slipped between my fingers 
Sifted through my hands
Swept up just like gusts of wind
Blow away the sand
You tried to ride the currents
Brave the crashing tides
Fight the vicious undertow
That dragged you down inside
But the struggle made you tired
Too fragile, limp and weak
It finally pulled you under
You'd sunken far too deep
Your suffering is over
You're now weightless, free from pain
No more will you have to swim
Those savage seas again
 But you'll always be beside me 
Not far from where I stand  
May your light shine like a beacon
And dance upon the sand.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Gauthier Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 10:43 AM
Wow. A pleasure to find your beautiful poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology, Laurie~
Mahoney Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 5:32 AM
Thank you so much!!!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 2:21 AM
This has such a terrific uplifting feeling! Wow!
Mahoney Avatar
July 18, 2020 at 11:05 AM
Thank you.. It was for my friend who suffered a tragic loss of a child.
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