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Sand

The mountain crumbles. The sand washes down. A multitude of broken hearts.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/27/2008 1:54:00 PM
Paints a tsunami of a picture as I see mud slides in Guatemala ... awesome write here, Brian. You have this form mastered for sure!
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Date: 9/27/2008 1:22:00 PM
Interesting use of this concise form to forward your message. Nice use of imagery. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 9/27/2008 11:27:00 AM
Great job on this Senryu - Landslides sure do reek havoc - God Bless
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