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Sand

Little by little the sand slips between my toes Little by little my heart turns to stone Little by little stone corrodes to sand falling between my toes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/14/2018 4:03:00 PM
This poem was innovative, captivating, and three dimensional in character. An inward journey filled with thoughts designed to inspire the soul and question reality. Emile.
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Date: 7/14/2018 11:11:00 AM
Sad...
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Date: 7/11/2018 5:50:00 PM
I enjoyed this one Arthur. I like how you put this together :)
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Date: 7/9/2018 6:21:00 PM
so very interesting how you tied together symbolically the sand and stone. I really like this.
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Date: 7/9/2018 4:38:00 PM
And the world spins around and round...Barbara is wonderful in every way... a true artist...Nice one Arthur
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Date: 7/9/2018 12:14:00 PM
That's a lot of sand
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Date: 7/9/2018 11:05:00 AM
ohh my, a full cycle of a moment brief yet deep , art... bring it on!...huggs
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Date: 7/9/2018 9:01:00 AM
Arthur.. I like your "circle of life"
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Date: 7/9/2018 8:23:00 AM
Wow, you have strong toes:0)
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Date: 7/9/2018 7:05:00 AM
I like xomo
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Date: 7/9/2018 6:27:00 AM
at times it can only take a few lines to feel the power in the poem. hugs
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Date: 7/9/2018 3:58:00 AM
you have a heart of gold my friend and melt me with your lines!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/9/2018 3:23:00 AM
I liked the song, amazingly deep and inspiring! A knowledgeable mind crafting a work of art! I enjoyed reading your beauty Arthur.. stay safe and blessed always.
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Date: 7/9/2018 2:10:00 AM
My favorite singer Hugs Eve
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