Angela Crabtree Poet Rhyme

Sanctuary Necessary

Camouflage afoot
hooves trembling
don't stay put
run aground disassembling
hurry shroud apparel
fortress in view
departure from the barrel
exemption you blew
woe
go



* It's hunting season, so I thought I would write about the poor deer :(

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Caren Krutsinger October 5, 2020 at 8:26 PM The deer is one of my power animals. I cringe whenever I hear a gunshot in November. Angela Crabtree October 6, 2020 at 12:28 PM I hear you. I'm vegen. :)

John Watt October 3, 2020 at 5:40 PM Angie, sometimes I feel like that deer, I just want to retreat to a safe, quiet place. Nice writing. I like your new avatar! ~ John Angela Crabtree October 4, 2020 at 11:00 AM Thank you, John. I think we all want to retreat to a quiet place at times. :)

Vijay Pandit October 3, 2020 at 5:44 AM Quite a reflective write, Angela. Angela Crabtree October 3, 2020 at 12:47 PM Thank you very much, Vijay. :) It's about a deer getting away from a hunter.

Silent One October 3, 2020 at 5:11 AM Sometimes solitude has all the answers.. Angela Crabtree October 3, 2020 at 12:47 PM This is true. Thank you for reading and commenting. :)

Victor Buhagiar October 2, 2020 at 11:12 PM Quite an introspective view of life. So deep in meaning. ~~ Angela Crabtree October 3, 2020 at 12:48 PM I appreciate your comment, Victor. :)