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Sanctuary Necessary

Camouflage afoot
hooves trembling
don't stay put
run aground disassembling
hurry shroud apparel
fortress in view
departure from the barrel
exemption you blew
woe
go



* It's hunting season, so I thought I would write about the poor deer :(

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Date: 10/5/2020 8:26:00 PM
The deer is one of my power animals. I cringe whenever I hear a gunshot in November.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/6/2020 12:28:00 PM
I hear you. I'm vegen. :)
Date: 10/3/2020 5:40:00 PM
Angie, sometimes I feel like that deer, I just want to retreat to a safe, quiet place. Nice writing. I like your new avatar! ~ John
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/4/2020 11:00:00 AM
Thank you, John. I think we all want to retreat to a quiet place at times. :)
Date: 10/3/2020 5:44:00 AM
Quite a reflective write, Angela.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/3/2020 12:47:00 PM
Thank you very much, Vijay. :) It's about a deer getting away from a hunter.
Date: 10/3/2020 5:11:00 AM
Sometimes solitude has all the answers..
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/3/2020 12:47:00 PM
This is true. Thank you for reading and commenting. :)
Date: 10/2/2020 11:12:00 PM
Quite an introspective view of life. So deep in meaning. ~~
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 10/3/2020 12:48:00 PM
I appreciate your comment, Victor. :)

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