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Migrant jays quiver on ruins of their calm abode As ghostly flakes of autumn’s trail reel with an insolent breeze. Winging low, crystal moon guides pale birds through a nest of light. Broken Wing’s Form S Contest Theme: Sanctuary 7/23/2017

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Susan Ashley

Date: 8/21/2017 9:46:00 PM

Hi Nette, a beautiful poem for a lovely win. Your last line is amazing. Congratulations on your win!

Eve Roper

Date: 8/18/2017 2:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your win , Nette ~*

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 8/16/2017 3:18:00 AM

An exquisite Sijo, Nette, and such a deserved win - congrats on this wonderfully-penned work of art!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/26/2017 8:08:00 AM

Great sijo, Nette, nature knows how to guide its own:)

Leon Datu

Date: 7/24/2017 1:46:00 PM

Nature finds a way to protect its creation. A stunning twist in the end--brilliant work that comforts me.

Tim Smith

Date: 7/24/2017 11:40:00 AM

This is so lovely nette...a soothing feeling is felt

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/24/2017 9:02:00 AM

I can't wait, nette. It is summer here and the birds won't be migrating for a while yet. Love this peaceful verse:) Good luck!

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/24/2017 6:36:00 AM

This is so peaceful, and beautifully written Nette. A favorite :) Thanks for sharing :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/24/2017 3:42:00 AM

Beautifully written my good friend! You have yet again brought emotion and expression to my senses! I really enjoyed reading this exemplary piece this morning! I hope you are doing well as your poetry is shining brightly! Great Work!!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/24/2017 1:32:00 AM

Just brilliant my friend, nette. Hugs and good luck!