Sanctuary

. a crimson sunrise ocean cliff guards safe haven nature's storm warning

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/8/2010 10:52:00 AM

I see congrats. on this fine read. i am a random person doing random reads, i am also rereading my latest comments. You have a style of deep words Mitch. Making your Haiku very interesting, today i will make you one of my personal favs. Just for catching my attention with your well thought out writes, and not holding back on your L.O.L. comments, enjoyed all of them, meant much on my end,..p.d

Rachel W

Date: 4/27/2010 5:01:00 PM

Fantastic! The image you paint is breathtaking, Mitch!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/23/2010 6:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Guiding Light contest Mitch. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/23/2010 4:47:00 AM

Enjoyed reading today... Are there cliffs near chico?

John Freeman

Date: 4/22/2010 6:25:00 PM

Congratulations Mitch on a fine poem and your success in the contest. Agape, Moses

Kim M

Date: 4/22/2010 2:21:00 PM

(oops! I previously meant the deep reddish color of a fiery golden sunset.)

Kim M

Date: 4/22/2010 2:16:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. This sanctuary appears as a golden safe haven.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/22/2010 2:05:00 PM

Congrats Mitch on your winning poem in Raul's contest... perfect words for the photo and a great win for u to enjoy my friend..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Rick Parise

Date: 4/22/2010 1:52:00 PM

Congrats on your win!!!!!!Very nice~Rick

Date: 4/22/2010 1:39:00 PM

Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest to my other comment. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/22/2010 12:51:00 PM

Mitch, congratulations on your success in my contest...Raul

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/22/2010 12:05:00 PM

I have been reading some wonderful poetry today here at the Soup. I am so happy your poetry is among those I have read Mitch. Wishing you the best in the Guiding Light contest. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 4/22/2010 10:58:00 AM

Quite unique take on your winning presentation for the competition Mitch, Awesome take, and good luck, Agape, Moses

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/22/2010 8:08:00 AM

I like your unique look at this photo graph, Mitch!! Good luck in the contest!! (ps...yes...you should check out the Sundial Bridge sometime...there is a clock face at the base of the bridge sculpture, that really does tell time...quite a amazing piece of engineering and design!)

Katherine Stella

Date: 4/22/2010 7:54:00 AM

beautiful imagery here thanks for sharing keep up the great work also thanks for your kind comment on mine enjoyed

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 4/21/2010 11:50:00 PM

Beautiful and original Haiku here, dear Mitch. Thanks for your nice comment. All the very best, Iolanda

Mitch White

Date: 4/21/2010 10:45:00 PM

OOooops I forgot the s in nature's

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/21/2010 10:33:00 PM

A nice haiku with good images. Good luck in the contest

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/21/2010 6:56:00 PM

You have created quite a peaceful image of the "sanctuary," Mitch and I think you'll do well in the competition. Wishing you luck! Love, Carolyn

Kim M

Date: 4/21/2010 6:34:00 PM

Mitch, I see the cliff guard (as in a football lineup) blocking the storm brewing on the dark side of the cliff from causing turbulence in the safe haven.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/21/2010 6:27:00 PM

If it is for the contest good luck, if not it should be. I like this picture you painted in my mind . The funny thing I do not even have to look at the picture to see if it speaks like the pic...p.d.

Date: 4/21/2010 6:19:00 PM

Beautiful interpretation of the picture. Nice use of imagery. Good luck in the contest. Karen

Rick Parise

Date: 4/21/2010 5:49:00 PM

Nice~~Enjoyed~~Good Luck !!!!!!~~Rick

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/21/2010 5:22:00 PM

Mitch, thanks for supporting my contest...Raul