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Sanctuary

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                                           a crimson sunrise

                                   ocean cliff guards safe haven

                                       nature's storm warning

Copyright © Mitch White | Year Posted 2010

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/8/2010 10:52:00 AM I see congrats. on this fine read. i am a random person doing random reads, i am also rereading my latest comments. You have a style of deep words Mitch. Making your Haiku very interesting, today i will make you one of my personal favs. Just for catching my attention with your well thought out writes, and not holding back on your L.O.L. comments, enjoyed all of them, meant much on my end,..p.d Login to Reply

Rachel W Date: 4/27/2010 5:01:00 PM Fantastic! The image you paint is breathtaking, Mitch! Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/23/2010 6:41:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Raul's Guiding Light contest Mitch. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 4/23/2010 4:47:00 AM Enjoyed reading today... Are there cliffs near chico? Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 4/22/2010 6:25:00 PM Congratulations Mitch on a fine poem and your success in the contest. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Kim M Date: 4/22/2010 2:21:00 PM (oops! I previously meant the deep reddish color of a fiery golden sunset.) Login to Reply

Kim M Date: 4/22/2010 2:16:00 PM Congratulations on your win. This sanctuary appears as a golden safe haven. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/22/2010 2:05:00 PM Congrats Mitch on your winning poem in Raul's contest... perfect words for the photo and a great win for u to enjoy my friend..luv.. "Sweetheart" Login to Reply

Date: 4/22/2010 1:39:00 PM Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on being one of the winners in Raul's contest to my other comment. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen Login to Reply

Raul Moreno Date: 4/22/2010 12:51:00 PM Mitch, congratulations on your success in my contest...Raul Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/22/2010 12:05:00 PM I have been reading some wonderful poetry today here at the Soup. I am so happy your poetry is among those I have read Mitch. Wishing you the best in the Guiding Light contest. Love, Carol Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 4/22/2010 10:58:00 AM Quite unique take on your winning presentation for the competition Mitch, Awesome take, and good luck, Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 4/22/2010 8:08:00 AM I like your unique look at this photo graph, Mitch!! Good luck in the contest!! (ps...yes...you should check out the Sundial Bridge sometime...there is a clock face at the base of the bridge sculpture, that really does tell time...quite a amazing piece of engineering and design!) Login to Reply

Katherine Stella Date: 4/22/2010 7:54:00 AM beautiful imagery here thanks for sharing keep up the great work also thanks for your kind comment on mine enjoyed Login to Reply

Iolanda Scripca Date: 4/21/2010 11:50:00 PM Beautiful and original Haiku here, dear Mitch. Thanks for your nice comment. All the very best, Iolanda Login to Reply

Mitch White Date: 4/21/2010 10:45:00 PM OOooops I forgot the s in nature's Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 4/21/2010 10:33:00 PM A nice haiku with good images. Good luck in the contest Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/21/2010 6:56:00 PM You have created quite a peaceful image of the "sanctuary," Mitch and I think you'll do well in the competition. Wishing you luck! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Kim M Date: 4/21/2010 6:34:00 PM Mitch, I see the cliff guard (as in a football lineup) blocking the storm brewing on the dark side of the cliff from causing turbulence in the safe haven. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/21/2010 6:27:00 PM If it is for the contest good luck, if not it should be. I like this picture you painted in my mind . The funny thing I do not even have to look at the picture to see if it speaks like the pic...p.d. Login to Reply

Date: 4/21/2010 6:19:00 PM Beautiful interpretation of the picture. Nice use of imagery. Good luck in the contest. Karen Login to Reply

Raul Moreno Date: 4/21/2010 5:22:00 PM Mitch, thanks for supporting my contest...Raul Login to Reply