Sanctification

Forest undergrowth,

Submits to the rising sun:

Rays of forgiveness.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Richards Avatar
August 31, 2011 at 3:45 PM
Makes me think of the forest that forgives, after a wild fire....opening up to new regrowth! Nicely done!
Brown Avatar
August 31, 2011 at 8:07 AM
I have been reading some very overwhelming poetry this morning Raul. I have enjoyed reading yours as always and hope to be reading more of it soon. Love, Carol
Culverhouse Avatar
August 31, 2011 at 7:25 AM
Different thoughts on this haiku....I enjoyed reading it with me coffee. Thanks on the spelling tip!!
Francis Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 7:55 PM
nice piece.
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