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Forest undergrowth, Submits to the rising sun: Rays of forgiveness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 8/31/2011 3:45:00 PM
Makes me think of the forest that forgives, after a wild fire....opening up to new regrowth! Nicely done!
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Date: 8/31/2011 8:07:00 AM
I have been reading some very overwhelming poetry this morning Raul. I have enjoyed reading yours as always and hope to be reading more of it soon. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/31/2011 7:25:00 AM
Different thoughts on this haiku....I enjoyed reading it with me coffee. Thanks on the spelling tip!!
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Date: 8/30/2011 7:55:00 PM
nice piece.
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