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Samurai the Foot Killer

Brick was put on a roller and deposited in the Bus
the Blond paramedic never left his side, Hey
where's my piece? It's right here pardner, said Bill.
Sorry I was busy puttin the eye's on the crowd. 
What'd ya take my piece for? It was layin on the ground

And you was nappin, didn't want any kids gettin a hold of it 
you really should take better care of it ya know!yea you should have
been there when I was beatin the bum. Yea I'm sure he's all banged up
pardner, Hey sweetie, take care of him will ya, he's delirious.

I gotta check some stuff Brick, Ill see ya at the Hospital,
Yea Cowboy, It's about dinner time, Your lookin a little thin
Must have been a small sandwich at lunch time,
Bill laughed, I'll see you later pardner, Take care
Bill spun on his heels and went on the hunt, Always on the hunt.

As the cute Paramedic was checking Brick out she hit a soft 
spot, Hey darlin that hurt...I'm sorry, I know it hurts , is it there?
Yea it is, ouch, yeah there. I'm sorry just try and relax.We'll be
at the Hospital in a coupla minutes and the Doc's will take good
care of you. Hey what's your name anyway.She pointed to her badge

That read La Plant, I'm Brick, Oh Sgt. Rodney ( Brick ) Townsend 
folks just call me Brick. By the way are you free tonight for diner?
Your kidding me right Brick? No Ma'am right as rain.
She blushed and said..Well we'll see what the Doc's say!
If they say ok... Arte we on? I got a sweet little place, great food

Alright, your on......
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Haick Avatar
December 23, 2010 at 10:38 AM
I'm smiling as I'm thinking Brick will be well in no time, Taz! Enjoying this and look forward to the continuation. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you and your family dear friend! Blessins, peace, happiness and joy always, Audrey
Neels Avatar
December 22, 2010 at 10:06 PM
And so the injured bloke got a date for his trouble ;) this made me smile, that's men for ya jk! Happy Holidays to you and those close to you Richard ;-) Wilma
Dufresne Avatar
December 22, 2010 at 8:17 PM
hey Taz, glad to see Brick got his pea shooter back! take care of him he's delirious... that's funny loved it. Lookd like ole Brick puttin pleasure before business. The only soft spot he got is the one for the ladies. I think! ps. had a wed auction going last nite so didn't get your message till late. Enjoyed - Later Taz -Bob
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