Samsara

raindrops
falling upon leaves
of reincarnation


March 30, 2016

naturehaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

April 1, 2016 at 7:59 PM

oh you got it right at the number 13, but a COOL KU. Congrats.

Sam Jameson

April 2, 2016 at 12:35 PM

Ha-- thank you, Andrea :) I appreciate the kind regards on the placement. Have a good one my friend!

Jan Allison

April 1, 2016 at 2:33 PM

beautifully penned Sam congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Sam Jameson

April 2, 2016 at 12:33 PM

Thank you, Jan :) Very kind of you-- I appreciate the warm comments. Have a great weekend!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

April 1, 2016 at 2:18 AM

Congrats on ur superb win with this lovely write Sam..

Sam Jameson

April 1, 2016 at 2:09 PM

Thank you, Dr. Upma-- I appreciate your warm regards :)

Connie Marcum Wong

March 31, 2016 at 3:45 AM

Oh I really love yours Sam, it has that aha moment! Congratulations on your placement! # 7 ; )

Sam Jameson

March 31, 2016 at 9:15 AM

Thank you, Connie :) I appreciate the warm comment-- glad you found some joy in the ready. Enjoy your day!

Timothy Hicks

March 31, 2016 at 3:17 AM

Congrats Sam! Super interesting. If you read some of the older Japanese haiku they can be very "Buddhist" like, and your last line reminds me of that ... sort of like the circle of life of the recycling leaves. A very contemplative haiku ... nicely executed!

Sam Jameson

March 31, 2016 at 9:14 AM

Thanks, Tim-- I appreciate the feedback as well as the placement. Happy to compete in this one..hopefully I can get back to writing more soon. Thanks and have a great day :)

John Lawless

March 30, 2016 at 4:08 PM

Sam, is this a "tongue in cheek"...and they'll be back next fall or a more subtle reference to the cycles of life in nature..methinks I know....good job.

Sam Jameson

March 30, 2016 at 5:43 PM

Keep 'em thinking for mystery makes them hungry ;) One of the best things about verse is when words open up multiple avenues of thought-- I'm going to keep my answer close to the vest and let you decide sir. Thanks for the feedback, John-- I'm glad you enjoyed the read some. Have a good one my friend.