Salvation

defy gravity,

defy gravity,

claim your slip,
secured by unseen spirits

many times, your journeys have fed asphalt to your
dreams, lifting highways above simple paths.....

now, the end has been seen       many years before,

small children know!
they look at you and smile

small children know........

                  they look at you and smile

only pushcarts         burdened with lies,

drown in tears.....

ice cream            taken in small amounts

                 is as close as I will get,


                             close,
             
                                    as I

                                            will get
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Doggett Avatar
July 18, 2009 at 11:33 AM
Very, very cfeative rgrds Bill
Dvorkis Avatar
July 18, 2009 at 9:56 AM
pushcarts burdened with lies.I guess you mean people who are older and maybe ride around on these things. that makes sense to me since they would also be more burdened with lies and so have a greater degree of fear at the approaching 'end' (I don't believe it's the real ending anyway). Carolyn sees it too in children, they're closer to the memory of the beginning then we are. I like the ice cream reference, innocent and childlike, I'd go with vanilla to connect with a child, they like vanilla...
Petalli Avatar
July 16, 2009 at 9:49 AM
I liked the sound of the words, time through it was really interesting to follow. thnx for your comment Mirela
Strand Avatar
July 16, 2009 at 12:09 AM
Another original write Jim.Well Done.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcom comments.
Devonshire Avatar
July 15, 2009 at 9:02 PM
Children do have a special connection to the other side. I envy this connection and admire the wisdom you convey in this excellent write, James! Love, Carolyn
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