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Salvation

defy gravity, defy gravity, claim your slip, secured by unseen spirits many times, your journeys have fed asphalt to your dreams, lifting highways above simple paths..... now, the end has been seen many years before, small children know! they look at you and smile small children know........ they look at you and smile only pushcarts burdened with lies, drown in tears..... ice cream taken in small amounts is as close as I will get, close, as I will get

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Bill Doggett

Date: 7/18/2009 11:33:00 AM

Very, very cfeative rgrds Bill

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 7/18/2009 9:56:00 AM

pushcarts burdened with lies.I guess you mean people who are older and maybe ride around on these things. that makes sense to me since they would also be more burdened with lies and so have a greater degree of fear at the approaching 'end' (I don't believe it's the real ending anyway). Carolyn sees it too in children, they're closer to the memory of the beginning then we are. I like the ice cream reference, innocent and childlike, I'd go with vanilla to connect with a child, they like vanilla...

Mirela Petalli

Date: 7/16/2009 9:49:00 AM

I liked the sound of the words, time through it was really interesting to follow. thnx for your comment Mirela

Brian Strand

Date: 7/16/2009 12:09:00 AM

Another original write Jim.Well Done.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcom comments.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/15/2009 9:02:00 PM

Children do have a special connection to the other side. I envy this connection and admire the wisdom you convey in this excellent write, James! Love, Carolyn