Salvation

Our grandson (7) made a game – 
He christened it “Salvation.”
Before he rattled off the rules
I asked his explanation.

“Do you know what salvation means?’
I queried; he admitted
He didn’t, so I asked his sib,
Against whom he was pitted.

“I’m only 5!” his sister said.
“I don’t know anything at all.
I haven’t even started school!”
A lot of guff for one so small.

For she knows plenty, but salvation’s
Not for kindergarten,
An age-related absence
Any IQ test would pardon.

So we explained, the game went on
And, good for sib relations,
The final score was even,
Each achieving 3 “salvations.”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
September 9, 2020 at 1:20 PM
This is hilariously written! Love it! Love the sassy five-year-old's admittance that she knows nothing at all. In ten years I dare guess she will know everything!
Watt Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 2:40 PM
Wonderful! I love your grandson's creativity and your granddaughter's chutzpah. How lucky they are to have you in their lives to nurture their talents and feed their hunger for knowledge with a good dose of fun thrown in. Great poem!
Wolf Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 8:36 PM
Maybe they meant 'salivations?!' lol. Slurp up the nachas, ilene. :)
Andresen Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 1:42 AM
- A good answer for someone in just 5 years ... :))) - I enjoy this sweet poem, Ilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcconnell Avatar
September 5, 2020 at 2:36 PM
Lovely charming piece ilene, a rather nice tale indeed.
Allison Avatar
September 5, 2020 at 2:08 PM
oh how charming:-) hugs jan xx
Leiser Avatar
September 5, 2020 at 1:53 PM
Sweet! Grandkids are such a fun blessing! Nicely expressed poem, Ilene! :)
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