Ishwar Zore Poet Rhyme

Salvador

 Did I even Mention before?
Theres some tension in my core
I can't be silent, no more
I always close my doors
And try to forget unsettled scores
And try to complete undone chores
Try to numb myself
Set on collision course
Try to hold down Hulk
With incredible force
Rather facing
Emotions ignored
To myself I swore
Never to fall unless sure
Unless I find myself adored
Unless I find myself restored
Unless I am treated like Thor
Unless I am willingly explored
Unless loves willingly poured
I refuse to be Metaphor
I'll rather be Commodore 
Fight storm like old boar
Then rest in peace ashore
An undefeated SALVADOR

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Caren Krutsinger January 21, 2019 at 4:05 AM What a fantastic poem! I would have labeled this one mono-rhyme, and they are so difficult. Nicely done my friend! You have made this seem effortless. Hey, wait, I am wrong. It is ALMOST a mono-rhyme, not quite. So nice! Ishwar Zore January 21, 2019 at 8:06 AM Thanks Caren. I am just recently trying to do such poems using only one repeating rhyme just to make myself think more and improve my rhyming ability . I don't know what are the diffrent types of lables poems are divided in... Infact while deciding the catagory i usually use RHYME because i don't understand what all others mean. Atleast i know one now "mono-rhyme". Thanks for that Caren.