Salvador

Did I even Mention before? Theres some tension in my core I can't be silent, no more I always close my doors And try to forget unsettled scores And try to complete undone chores Try to numb myself Set on collision course Try to hold down Hulk With incredible force Rather facing Emotions ignored To myself I swore Never to fall unless sure Unless I find myself adored Unless I find myself restored Unless I am treated like Thor Unless I am willingly explored Unless loves willingly poured I refuse to be Metaphor I'll rather be Commodore Fight storm like old boar Then rest in peace ashore An undefeated SALVADOR

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/21/2019 4:05:00 AM

What a fantastic poem! I would have labeled this one mono-rhyme, and they are so difficult. Nicely done my friend! You have made this seem effortless. Hey, wait, I am wrong. It is ALMOST a mono-rhyme, not quite. So nice!

Ishwar Zore
Date: 1/21/2019 8:06:00 AM

Thanks Caren. I am just recently trying to do such poems using only one repeating rhyme just to make myself think more and improve my rhyming ability . I don't know what are the diffrent types of lables poems are divided in... Infact while deciding the catagory i usually use RHYME because i don't understand what all others mean. Atleast i know one now "mono-rhyme". Thanks for that Caren.