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Saluting Salt

Sprinkle of grit in the creases of faces terrestrial Depravity aided by YouTube love advice tutorials Doll eyes gloss lips curvaceous torso ubiquitous Entices spiceless meat frozen with unhappiness Piled minuscule crystals emenate white vibrance Pull unseasoned cuts to sea salt tumult violence Dishes missing piquant rub their raw in welcome Against uptown gusto, ditch wrinkled wearisome Screen learned psychology reveals men on X- ray Seduction refined script, - precise final edit essay Melting snow merges with meat, stinging and yet Mounts a powder poured alternate animal to zest 6th March 2021 (not for Contest, as didn't stick to syllable rule)

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Date: 3/16/2021 8:05:00 PM
Interesting perspective on the salt theme. This would have been a great contender.
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Date: 3/16/2021 5:52:00 PM
'Put salt on it' -- never so eloquently expressed, O Poetess. Masterful! :) gw
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