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Salute To Spring Haiku






             soft, silken sunrise
             subtle, stitched, shimmering strands
             swallows singing songs


                     5-14-2022

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Elena Eagle

May 16, 2022 at 6:40 AM

This was wonderful. Just really liked the imagery.

Harry Horsman

May 15, 2022 at 2:17 AM

Beautiful spring song, Pangie, love this... If you would have had Silver instead of gold you would have all 'S' alliteration. Just a suggestion. Harry

Panagiota Romios

May 15, 2022 at 4:56 PM

Thanks Harry! I soupmailed you and am commenting here with the same message, I followed your suggestion and made the suggestion you proposed. Tuned theHaiku into an....,,, “Alliterative Haiku.”. Salutes to you for a grand Suggestion. In appreciation....Pangie)))

Panagiota Romios

May 15, 2022 at 11:20 AM

Harry, I changed the one word per your suggestion. This is now an official-alliterative Haiku. I prefer this type as a writer. Rhyming Haikus I truly love! Appreciate your suggestion and visit, you wise man! Pangie