Salute to Mercury



Salute ! to my beloved ruling planet
Mercury, who sits in my house of
communication too, resplendent in 
kaleidoscopic prismatic presentation 
articulations profound, closest to
our Golden Fountain of Fountains
radiating HIS heat, you carry a Roman
god’s name so searing sweet
your ear open to Core’s desires 
serving unique in metallic colour
verve with matching orbital speed —

you precisely dictate how my letters
should ring your hilly terrain sting 
to bring what is to be done for One !
blessed am I to be governed by
smallest ~ for in density minute lies
both exaltation and retrogrades 
your light and dark sides erupt 
smooth lavic messages of cold
reflection, revisiting revelling  
reassessments, renewal __

your core is torrid, you have no moon
to swoon upon whilst eccentrically 
orbiting, emitting volatile electrons
across your atmosphere-less poles
we cannot but curtsy to your weird 
terrain containing the self-same 
sodium, calcium, potassium,
magnesium that we do too in 
our own micro orbits mundane 

your glow nubbles, almost as 
dense as Gaia’s, shower
silvery for us to catch in batch …
pleased am I to articulate your
hatter-platter orders, flitter fast
as your narrow ridges blast wind
eruptions into your own exosphere 

Mercury, the Small ! you have no 
qualms about pulling rugs from 
under our feet, triggering our wires 
making plexus reel, seal lips bleeping 
Gaia’s communications knot, block, 
glitch mails, voices, internet —
take-offs cannot merely make-off 
when you, Planet of Communication,
dictate a slow down, as HE requires, 
for us to sit quiescent queenly or 
retire, to smell roses, perhaps 
examine our toes !

metallic-silicate  power holds 
your heavenly fluid ~ we bow to 
your quality of knowing when things 
are to fall apart, your messages 
manifest, so let it be ____

Salute we your highly magnetic pull, 
opening portals into Spirit’s plastrons (...)
though rarely visited by human probes
 ~ some two hundred thousand 
photos of your beauteous body did
Messenger capture for Earthlings 
to glean, before she crashed exhausted, 
into your tessellated surface _____

Not do I wish to be ruled by any
other heavenly body, decreeing 
did Divine precisely, as usual, 
make my frequencies align 
with your smart commanding
peculiarity (...) ! 

























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Kelly Avatar
April 30, 2026 at 8:25 PM
As a sky watcher, i have a great respect for this tiny yet highly spiritual planet. I think Rodin’s “Thinker” must have been musing about Mercury. Very fortunate that Mercury is in your ruling planet, and your poem beautifully expresses that respect.
Daniels Avatar
April 30, 2026 at 9:42 PM
ThkU for visit & comment, Deb. I like this poem too. Rodin’s Thinker could be thinking about anything. I’ve been wanting to do an ekphrasis on this for some time. Someday, it might come to fore. I know quite a bit about the connection between Mercury & the Sun, from a spiritual perspective, so I’m fortunate in this respect. Have a beautiful day. Xx.
Buhagiar Avatar
March 28, 2026 at 3:08 AM
You did well to choose Mercury. A great tribute to a small planet. You use great imagery and allusions, One of my fav poets.
Daniels Avatar
March 28, 2026 at 6:11 AM
ThkU as always for your positive comments, Vics. I appreciate your poems mucho too. Have a beautiful weekend as the weather warms your side. X.
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