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Salty Breeze

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Inspired by the song: "Lonely Looking Sky" from Jonathan Livingston Seagull of Neil Diamond

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I am here and there but I belong to somewhere with the salty breeze I fly low and slow watching what are the closest worries to be faught I am a lost soul fighting against loneliness ~flying among words~

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Victor Buhagiar
Date: 9/29/2023 8:38:00 AM
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A tantalising series of haiku, so well written. Very original.
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/29/2023 11:53:00 AM
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Thank you so much Victor. Blessings...!

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