Salty Breeze

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Inspired by the song: "Lonely Looking Sky" from Jonathan Livingston Seagull of Neil Diamond

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I am here and there but I belong to somewhere with the salty breeze I fly low and slow watching what are the closest worries to be faught I am a lost soul fighting against loneliness ~flying among words~

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/29/2023 8:38:00 AM

A tantalising series of haiku, so well written. Very original.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/29/2023 11:53:00 AM

Thank you so much Victor. Blessings...!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/28/2023 3:27:00 PM

Wow...what a powerful Haiku! Seriously, I appreciate your unique craftsmanship and style....I loved the last stanza...it was poignant...flighting against loneliness~flying among words....extraordinary! blessings, Sara

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/28/2023 3:45:00 PM

Thank you Sara. How nice you liked itxxxx