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Inspired by the song: "Lonely Looking Sky" from Jonathan Livingston Seagull of Neil Diamond

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Salty Breeze

I am here and there
      but I belong to somewhere
with the salty breeze 

I fly low and slow
      watching what are the closest
                   worries to be faught

                            I am a lost soul
      fighting against loneliness
~flying among words~
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Buhagiar Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 8:38 AM
A tantalising series of haiku, so well written. Very original.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 11:53 AM
Thank you so much Victor. Blessings...!
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