Salt, Water, Breath
This hypnotic potion
a bottle of oceans
on necks which still sting
from the salt of the sea
is pulling me under
is raging like thunder
is threatening to pull
the whole world over me
I'm feeling quite queasy
It's suddenly easy
to breathe underwater
and dive
A potion from oceans
a stir, a commotion
and suddenly I am
aware I'm alive.
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