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Salt of Tears

~Haiku Contest~ lying on my back.. tasting raindrops from the sky.. some the salt of tears..

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/3/2012 1:19:00 PM

Michael, a wonderful haiku,,, thank you so much for your comment,,it means much tome... always...pd

Dinda Minardi

Date: 6/25/2011 9:05:00 AM

Sad haiku... Reminded me of times when I cried without any reason..

Kash Poet

Date: 6/25/2011 6:33:00 AM

Very nice Haiku Michael...enjoyed.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/25/2011 2:41:00 AM

oh shucks, this one tugs at the heartstrings-- really like that last line, very poignant, Michael :) and thank you for your inspiring comments in my haiku-- plus you know I am always happy to help-- hugs back to you :)

Dalila Agtani

Date: 6/25/2011 12:47:00 AM

I lost you for a while Michael but I am back to read some more of your poems, Your kind words always uplift my heart to write more. I am learning a lot from everybody in PS. Nice Haiku. Dalila

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/24/2011 9:01:00 PM

how true ..those tears seem to haunt us Michael.. lovely expressions my W.K. as your Jersey Girl in puppy shopping mode now..oh..

Audrey Haick

Date: 6/24/2011 8:11:00 PM

Enjoyed the visual, Michael. Reminds me of the old song, by Rick Nelson? "I'll Do My Crying in the Rain" . Best wishes in the contest and a great weekend. Always, Annalise

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/24/2011 3:56:00 PM

Very interesting Haiku..Enjoyed..If for the contest, good luck..Reads like a winner to me..Sara

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 6/24/2011 2:45:00 PM

as chris says this is a unique haiku and also a poignant one, good luck in the contest...