Michael J. Falotico Poet Haiku

Salt of Tears

~Haiku Contest~

                                                       lying on my back..
                                             tasting raindrops from the sky..
                                                   some the salt of tears..

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Poet Destroyer A April 3, 2012 at 1:19 PM Michael, a wonderful haiku,,, thank you so much for your comment,,it means much tome... always...pd

Dinda Minardi June 25, 2011 at 9:05 AM Sad haiku... Reminded me of times when I cried without any reason..

Kash Poet June 25, 2011 at 6:33 AM Very nice Haiku Michael...enjoyed.

Kabuteng P.Ink K. June 25, 2011 at 2:41 AM oh shucks, this one tugs at the heartstrings-- really like that last line, very poignant, Michael :) and thank you for your inspiring comments in my haiku-- plus you know I am always happy to help-- hugs back to you :)

Dalila Agtani June 25, 2011 at 12:47 AM I lost you for a while Michael but I am back to read some more of your poems, Your kind words always uplift my heart to write more. I am learning a lot from everybody in PS. Nice Haiku. Dalila

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 24, 2011 at 9:01 PM how true ..those tears seem to haunt us Michael.. lovely expressions my W.K. as your Jersey Girl in puppy shopping mode now..oh..

Audrey Haick June 24, 2011 at 8:11 PM Enjoyed the visual, Michael. Reminds me of the old song, by Rick Nelson? "I'll Do My Crying in the Rain" . Best wishes in the contest and a great weekend. Always, Annalise

Sara Kendrick June 24, 2011 at 3:56 PM Very interesting Haiku..Enjoyed..If for the contest, good luck..Reads like a winner to me..Sara

Charlotte Puddifoot June 24, 2011 at 2:45 PM as chris says this is a unique haiku and also a poignant one, good luck in the contest...