Salt In My Wounds

With speed of light, my tender heart dropped
Stitches burst open, my repairs unlocked 
Wasn't something I could avoid, nothing I could stop
Neither was the handful of salt tossed on top

I had truly been feeling a little more at ease
Until I stumbled upon something I wasn't meant to see
Put to rest, painful memories unfolded before me
My wound reopened and started to bleed

Two hometown visits and two family meets
Again, jumping in with both silly, wet feet
Shacking up might be next, wouldn't that be sweet ??
After last year's brutal sh*t show, I ain't having a repeat

Nope, won't be seeing this girl's face with a pout
She's been hurt more than enough, that is no doubt
Onwards and upwards, that's what I'm talking about
And one day, he'll realize what he's been left without
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Laurie Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 6:11 PM
Hello Tammy ... that nasty feeling is tattooed on the mind so salt in the wound is not easily forgotten - thank you Tammy - Lindsay
Ol Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 5:02 PM
Hi Lindsay! Oh yes. Definitely not easily forgotten. Thank you so much for your comment! :)
Omar Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 7:17 AM
You have such a great talent.
Ol Avatar
September 1, 2021 at 1:19 PM
Awe, thank you so much Mohamed..that just made my day!! :)
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace