Salmon

salmon leaping high
up the waterfalls to spawn
sadly then you die
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lamoureux Avatar
January 11, 2014 at 7:59 AM
They probably can use the rest after their arduous journey.
Hamilton Avatar
January 11, 2014 at 8:28 AM
lol Rick I bet they are , but they have for-filled their purpose in life unlike most of us lol Shadow x smile hug
Dunn Avatar
January 6, 2014 at 2:03 PM
Nature can be very curl but it has reasons for what happens it's all about the circle of life, i enjoyed your poem here because it is such an honest raw right about nature and the struggle of life. cheri and thanks for the congrads my fellow souper. cheri take care
Hamilton Avatar
January 6, 2014 at 2:24 PM
yes survival of the fittest Cheri ty Shadow x smile hug
Mehta Avatar
January 6, 2014 at 8:29 AM
Sorry, I am a pure veggie, hahah, Shadow, nice humor
Hamilton Avatar
January 6, 2014 at 2:23 PM
ty Ram Shadow x smile hug
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