Salmon

salmon leaping high up the waterfalls to spawn sadly then you die

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/11/2014 7:59:00 AM

They probably can use the rest after their arduous journey.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/11/2014 8:28:00 AM

lol Rick I bet they are , but they have for-filled their purpose in life unlike most of us lol Shadow x smile hug

Cherl Dunn

Date: 1/6/2014 2:03:00 PM

Nature can be very curl but it has reasons for what happens it's all about the circle of life, i enjoyed your poem here because it is such an honest raw right about nature and the struggle of life. cheri and thanks for the congrads my fellow souper. cheri take care

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/6/2014 2:24:00 PM

yes survival of the fittest Cheri ty Shadow x smile hug

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/6/2014 8:29:00 AM

Sorry, I am a pure veggie, hahah, Shadow, nice humor

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/6/2014 2:23:00 PM

ty Ram Shadow x smile hug