Salesman

A grinning salesman at the door,
She slammed it in his face and swore.

For Susan's Overreaction
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
November 30, 2011 at 8:49 AM
Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Overreactions and Drama Queens" contest Jack. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
November 29, 2011 at 10:10 PM
This was short but it was VERY deserving of a win. Congrats in the contest, my friend.
Freeman Avatar
November 29, 2011 at 10:51 AM
A cool unique, Jack. Smile. Congarts on a worthy win. Agape, Moses
Devonshire Avatar
November 10, 2011 at 9:54 AM
Salesmen who come to my door get no response at all. I can't even hear them knock and I'm thankful for that. Fun poem for Susan's contest. Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
November 10, 2011 at 9:51 AM
haha..Jack.. a clever piece luv..good luck in the contest .. I think I would have reacted the same..oh...
Sivey Avatar
November 9, 2011 at 9:29 PM
Ha ha, that will break the smiling of the salesman! Not to many of those before that smile travels upside down!! Wonderful write!!
Wesley Avatar
November 9, 2011 at 6:55 PM
Great way to end the confrontation. A fun verse to read Jack.
Dietrich Avatar
November 9, 2011 at 5:19 PM
hahaha, HOw I wish I could come up with such short and clever ways to do these kinds of difficult contests!!!
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