Sakura Fireflies

Mesmerised I watch
                                 Dancing sakura fireflies
                                    Our natures epoch
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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De Burca Avatar
May 1, 2013 at 9:15 PM
I do admire your Haiku, fantastic wordcraft.
Cogan Avatar
May 2, 2013 at 4:25 PM
Many thanks, Seosamh :)
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April 22, 2013 at 6:56 PM
Shane, a very sweet and lovely win :-) Congratulations in Susan's "Cherry Blossom Haiku" contest. Your poem is awesome with imagery. always & forever-LINDA
Cogan Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 12:12 AM
Thanks, Linda. Really enjoying writing the haiku's and sharing them with all you good people :)
Gasun Avatar
April 21, 2013 at 8:31 AM
Big hearty congratulations on your super win my dear Shane! I really love your great haiku! Cheers! Love & hugs, Leonora
Cogan Avatar
April 21, 2013 at 1:27 PM
Many thanks, Leonora :)
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April 21, 2013 at 1:54 AM
Many congratulations Shane, very visual xx
Cogan Avatar
April 21, 2013 at 2:27 AM
Many thanks, Mandy!
Dietrich Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 11:34 PM
Love that imagery. congrats for your win.
Cogan Avatar
April 21, 2013 at 2:27 AM
Thanks, Andrea. Congrats to you also!
Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2013 at 2:36 AM
- You're very good with haiku poems Shane! - Welcome to P-Soup!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Cogan Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 2:58 AM
Thanks, Anne Lise. I'm enjoying writing and sharing them with everyone :)
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