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Saki

saki served warm strong
in painted noritake cup....
headache nausea

sunrise beautiful
light so bright golden ...
headache pounding

saki served warm strong
by the moonlight with you...
no thanks through


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Sponsor:Joe Maverick

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Carol Sunshine Brown

August 10, 2012 at 5:27 AM

Congratulations on your win in Joe's "Haiku Challenge" contest Sara. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

August 6, 2012 at 2:55 PM

a humorous set this is, much enjoyed it, sara. Congrats on the winners' list.

Nette Onclaud

August 6, 2012 at 12:41 AM

i'll drink to this, sara.. congrats on your greeat win!..:) huggs

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

August 5, 2012 at 1:20 PM

Wonderful haiku, Sara! I love the contrasting images...well done! Congrats on a super win. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Lee Ramage

August 5, 2012 at 12:28 PM

Sara, made me chuckle, well done. Congrats on the win. Lee

David Williams

August 5, 2012 at 11:50 AM

sara congrats on your win, love it...David

Andrea Dietrich

May 24, 2012 at 3:34 PM

well, this is quite an interesting juxtaposition, sweetie! I never could understand what joe really wanted in this contest. I wish you luck!

Sara Kendrick

May 24, 2012 at 4:33 PM

Andrea, I changed my entry and put it here so that I would not have to delete it out of the contest..I reposted the waterfall haiku..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 24, 2012 at 3:19 PM

Unique haiku Sara, love it. - oxox Anne-Lise

Nathan D.

May 24, 2012 at 10:50 AM

awesome ,

James Peranteau

May 24, 2012 at 7:17 AM

A great Haiku dear poet ! This reminds me of the scripture where it says, " It rains on the wicked as well as the faithful ". Powerful write Sara ! Have a blessed week my friend....much love, james

Sara Kendrick

May 24, 2012 at 4:32 PM

I changed this one on you..Thanks for this great review..It fits with the other Haiku very well...Sara

Poet Destroyer A

May 23, 2012 at 10:11 PM

i love it Sara,,,... thank you for sharing... good night..pd

Pace Ink-U-Script

May 23, 2012 at 8:08 PM

Lovely Haiku here Sara!! Love it

Painted Hunter

May 23, 2012 at 6:48 PM

An excellent haiku here!

Phyllis Babcock

May 23, 2012 at 1:41 PM

Nice haiku Sara for the contest. love phyl

Russell Sivey

May 23, 2012 at 11:53 AM

What a fabulous write my friend! This entry should do very well! I love how you brought in a drug kartel within this perfectly serene scene, how you disrupted the whole feel! This was an awesome move Sara! Great Work!! Sorry to hear about the pains you have been having, I hope there is an easier way to help you with this pain without having you go the route you have gone before! I'll be thinking about you!

David Williams

May 23, 2012 at 11:37 AM

Sara great entree, good luck..David

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