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Sailors Beware

Mermadic waves, her feminine tailspin kaleidoscopic. Drastic and hypnotic, nautical miles in search of new blood. Sea’s miffed with white caps drawing Neptune, smarting for epic brawl. 6/4/2020 Let the Pens Flow - Sijo Poetry Contest Sponsor: Jenish Somadas

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2020 6:53:00 PM

very cool creative imagery which you do so well, Kim. Congrats in the contest.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/13/2020 7:29:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/12/2020 7:11:00 AM

"feminine tailspin", "white caps drawing Neptune"...such a gorgeous dreamy write Kim! This is beautiful. Love it. Congratulations on your win :) Much love

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/13/2020 7:28:00 PM

Thank you, Aditi!

Jenish Somadas

Date: 6/12/2020 1:24:00 AM

Beautifully crafted Sijo..Great write Kim..Congratulations..

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/12/2020 6:23:00 AM

Thank you, Jenish!

Funom Makama

Date: 6/8/2020 8:56:00 PM

Wow! The sailors need to sail with caution. If I am one and is caught by her, I definitely have the needed charm to take her to the moon as I slip away unsucked! LOL!. Great write my friend.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/12/2020 6:23:00 AM

LOL...you put yourself there. Thank you, Funom!