Kim Rodrigues Poet Sijo

Sailors Beware

Mermadic waves, her feminine tailspin kaleidoscopic.
Drastic and hypnotic, nautical miles in search of new blood.
Sea’s miffed with white caps drawing Neptune, smarting for epic brawl.

6/4/2020
Let the Pens Flow - Sijo Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Jenish Somadas

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Andrea Dietrich June 13, 2020 at 6:53 PM very cool creative imagery which you do so well, Kim. Congrats in the contest. Kim Rodrigues June 13, 2020 at 7:29 PM Thank you, Andrea!

Aditi Mishra June 12, 2020 at 7:11 AM "feminine tailspin", "white caps drawing Neptune"...such a gorgeous dreamy write Kim! This is beautiful. Love it. Congratulations on your win :) Much love Kim Rodrigues June 13, 2020 at 7:28 PM Thank you, Aditi!

Jenish Somadas June 12, 2020 at 1:24 AM Beautifully crafted Sijo..Great write Kim..Congratulations.. Kim Rodrigues June 12, 2020 at 6:23 AM Thank you, Jenish!

Funom Makama June 8, 2020 at 8:56 PM Wow! The sailors need to sail with caution. If I am one and is caught by her, I definitely have the needed charm to take her to the moon as I slip away unsucked! LOL!. Great write my friend. Kim Rodrigues June 12, 2020 at 6:23 AM LOL...you put yourself there. Thank you, Funom!

Silent One June 6, 2020 at 9:38 AM Such a great selection of words in your Sijo... Kim Rodrigues June 6, 2020 at 8:06 PM Thank you, Silent!

Caren Krutsinger June 6, 2020 at 7:03 AM Gorgeous sijo that made me yearn to dive into the sea and become a mermaid this morning. Thank you for that Kim. Kim Rodrigues June 6, 2020 at 7:16 AM Thank you, sweet friend!

Chris Green June 5, 2020 at 3:28 PM Beautifully done my friend. Best wishes in the contest Kim Rodrigues June 5, 2020 at 7:15 PM Thank you, Chris! Nice to hear from you

Darlene De Beaulieu June 5, 2020 at 12:17 PM Hello Kim, yes it is sailor beware. Enjoy your day my friend. hugs, Darlene Darlene De Beaulieu June 6, 2020 at 3:11 PM Hello kim, you are so welcome. Enjoy your day my friend. Kim Rodrigues June 5, 2020 at 1:30 PM Thanks ,sweet Darlene! :)

Harry Horsman June 5, 2020 at 9:36 AM Classic poetry, Kim, awesome love it Kim Rodrigues June 5, 2020 at 1:30 PM Thank you, Harry!

Mahtab Bangalee June 4, 2020 at 11:16 PM Mermaid- fantastic element in poetic pen! Kim Rodrigues June 5, 2020 at 5:59 AM Thanks, Mahtab!