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Sailors Beware

Mermadic waves, her feminine tailspin kaleidoscopic.
Drastic and hypnotic, nautical miles in search of new blood.
Sea’s miffed with white caps drawing Neptune, smarting for epic brawl.

6/4/2020
Let the Pens Flow - Sijo Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Jenish Somadas

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/13/2020 6:53:00 PM very cool creative imagery which you do so well, Kim. Congrats in the contest. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/13/2020 7:29:00 PM Thank you, Andrea!

Aditi Mishra Date: 6/12/2020 7:11:00 AM "feminine tailspin", "white caps drawing Neptune"...such a gorgeous dreamy write Kim! This is beautiful. Love it. Congratulations on your win :) Much love Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/13/2020 7:28:00 PM Thank you, Aditi!

Jenish Somadas Date: 6/12/2020 1:24:00 AM Beautifully crafted Sijo..Great write Kim..Congratulations.. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/12/2020 6:23:00 AM Thank you, Jenish!

Funom Makama Date: 6/8/2020 8:56:00 PM Wow! The sailors need to sail with caution. If I am one and is caught by her, I definitely have the needed charm to take her to the moon as I slip away unsucked! LOL!. Great write my friend. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/12/2020 6:23:00 AM LOL...you put yourself there. Thank you, Funom!

Silent One Date: 6/6/2020 9:38:00 AM Such a great selection of words in your Sijo... Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/6/2020 8:06:00 PM Thank you, Silent!

Caren Krutsinger Date: 6/6/2020 7:03:00 AM Gorgeous sijo that made me yearn to dive into the sea and become a mermaid this morning. Thank you for that Kim. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/6/2020 7:16:00 AM Thank you, sweet friend!

Chris Green Date: 6/5/2020 3:28:00 PM Beautifully done my friend. Best wishes in the contest Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/5/2020 7:15:00 PM Thank you, Chris! Nice to hear from you

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 6/5/2020 12:17:00 PM Hello Kim, yes it is sailor beware. Enjoy your day my friend. hugs, Darlene Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 6/6/2020 3:11:00 PM Hello kim, you are so welcome. Enjoy your day my friend. Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/5/2020 1:30:00 PM Thanks ,sweet Darlene! :)

Harry Horsman Date: 6/5/2020 9:36:00 AM Classic poetry, Kim, awesome love it Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/5/2020 1:30:00 PM Thank you, Harry!

Mahtab Bangalee Date: 6/4/2020 11:16:00 PM Mermaid- fantastic element in poetic pen! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 6/5/2020 5:59:00 AM Thanks, Mahtab!